A lot of things won’t matter yet and haven’t been added. You can also make character combinations you could not get in book one, that is also not important. There are very few minor variables, they will be added in tbe beta, unless they are of vital importance to a particular chapter.The reason I am putting this up is to continuity test it.Please check for very long pages of text, I haven’t added many page breaks, so let me know if you find things that gets tedious.ĭon’t bother with grammar, spelling or awkward prose (pronoun errors are fine).Check for continuity issues, when people know things they shouldn’t, or ignore things they should have reacted to.If you find any abrupt transitions in the text, please let me know.This is the reason why I am putting this up, with the varibles it becomes hard to predict what the outcome will be at times. Any passages that makes you confused or sticks out as awkward?Īverage playthrough varies a lot, but seems to be around 8550 words long.Hunted down a lot of the things you pointed out (thank you), but there are still a few known issues I haven’t fixed:
Can still make an unrealistic character.Lady Argent flirt/fight will be extended and less abrupt once I get in character.The stat sheet is not updated for book two.Some random new things apart from fixes and a new chapter: Can now choose to have won against Argent in the past and taken sample.
Fallen hero retribution alpha update#
Added content related to this and some prepwork for the next update (shrinktime!).Fallen hero retribution marshal steel update# More content, about a third of a chapter.Potential big bloody reveal, so BEWARE BACKGROUND SPOILERS! One truth will be out there.
Now hopefully the beginning relationship scenes with Ortega should work properly if friends.
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